Mistress of the Dread Eclipse
A Very veRy EVIL PoeM fRom the depThs of NoWhere
The book is everything now
Obtained by
Daughter of the Abyss
Seeks communion with places only traveled by the Darkest Gods
The known
Now unknown
Again and ever after
Sovereign ruler of darkness and shadow annihilated
Infused with dark divinity on the mountain
Strangest friend all throughout
Serpent of lies brings forth
Daughter of the Abyss
Snake of everything
Slithering on the ground
Begs her
Snake of second thought
Snake of
Mutilated carcass
Daughter
Walking beyond the veil
Daughter
Servant of Baphomet
Daughter
Lifted all seeing symbol to the sky
The Bleak Trinity appears written deep within the book’s syntax
Written with love
Transforms her with Shadow Magick in the empty wee hours
In this old empty cold castle
Slipping between shadows to travel unseen corridors
She is aware of Phantasmal secrets never known before seen
Not by anyone of this cold earth
Not by anything holy anymore
I like how you wrote that the known is now unknown.
As one ventures deeper into the search for meaning, he is baptized by truth, and all of the programming he has experienced since birth begins to fall away.
The way you repeated Daughter of the Abyss pulled me right into the center of the poem. It felt like a chant, something ritualistic, and I could almost hear the weight of each return. The cold castle imagery stayed with me too, that sense of someone moving through shadows that know more than any living thing should. It gave the whole piece a quiet menace that lingered after the last line. I liked feeling the shift from seeking power to being transformed by it.
The mix of devotion and dread in your language made the world feel close and far at the same time. Those lines about the book being everything now felt like a warning and an invitation in one place. It made me think of moments when obsession becomes a doorway you never meant to open. There was something strangely tender in the way you wrote about darkness.
The poem breathed with its own strange pulse.