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Parker McCoy's avatar

I think this really captures of the feel of nightmares or night terrors. I love the picture and the imagery in the language, including false old friends. Sometimes you just have to wonder about people. Great poem.

know your innerverse's avatar

This reads like a descent into memory itself—fragmented, haunting, and strangely tender beneath the darkness. It feels like chasing meaning through fog 🥹🫶✨